Hi class,
In this section we are going to be working with space order paragraphs. They are like the time order paragraphs we worked on earlier in this class. However, with space order you need to use your imagination more. Try to visualize ever little detail when you are doing pre-writing. Then add important details to your paragraph so that the reader can visualize your refrigerator. Please limit your paragraph to ten or fewer sentences.
Mr. Osterman
24 comments:
My Refrigerator
Yuka Miyagi
071926K
11.21.2008
The color of my refrigerator is gray and it is very big. It has 4 drawers. I will explain each drawer today. Many drink and many eggs are always entering in the top of a drawer. There are some kinds of drinks for example mils or juice or tea or coffee. So I can always choose drink with my feeling. Many ice creams are entering in the second of a drawer. Sometimes we have 4 kinds of ice cream, I am very happy then. Frozen foods are entering in the third of a drawer. Finally, many vegetables are entering in the fourth of a drawer. My refrigerator is very usefull.
My Refrigerator
In my house, we have a middle-sized gray refrigerator which has a lot of food, drink inside. It has three shelves, a drawer and two door-side pockets. On the top shelf, there is a pack of sliced pork, two fish, and cases of frozen food such as green peas, corn, and croquettes. On the next shelf are seasonings; miso, soy sauce, butter, cooked seaweed, strawberry jam, kimchi, and pickled plums. They are neatly arranged so that we can put in and take out easily: Frequently-used stuff such as miso, soy sauce and butter are put in the front, and other things are sitting in the back. On the third shelf lies a bottle of green tea, coke and mineral water. In the drawer, there are greens and fruits such as a quarter of a cabbage, an onion, carrots, and an apple. Each of them is wrapped and separated so as not to influence one another. Finally, on the door-side pockets there is a pack of milk, a bottle of vegetable juice, mayonnaise, ketchup and eggs in order. Things in our refrigerator are not perfectly organized, but keep neatness.
My refrigerator
My refrigerator is small and white. There are two doors. The upper door is refrigerator and the lower one is freezer. In the freezer, I have rice, fish, pork, chicken, ice, and coffee. Freezer is very useful for people who live alone. In the refrigerator, I have some drinks; green tea, soy milk, milk and amaretto(liqueur). I love drinking mix juice of soy milk and vegetables. Also, I have some seasoning staffs in it; miso, kochujyang(Korean miso), mayonnaise, ketchup, vinegar, and Worcester sauce. I usually cook Asian dishes. I also have cheese and butter, because I sometimes make gratin. Vegetables changes depend on the day. Today, I have onions, ginger, Chinese pickle(Szechuan), a Japanese radish.
My Refrigerator
In my house, there is refrigerator in the kitchen. It is big but very old. We have to buy new one, because we sometimes hear strange sound from our refrigerator. The top of the refrigerator, there is freezer. We put frozen foods, ice cream and ice. In the middle, we put eggs, little water bottle and some food like leftover. Then, the bottom of this, we have drawer space. There are some chocolate and jelly. So we put in dessert. I often open this drawer. The most bottom of the space, we put in vegetables and big bottle of juice. I hardly open this drawer because I do not cook. Actually, I do not know what items in.
My Refrigerator
In my house, there is a new refrigerator that we bought in last month because old one has broken. The new refrigerator is bigger than old one, so we can put more many stuff into it. The refrigerator is divided into three drawers and a shelf space. Two drawers are frozen space, and other drawer and shelf are cold space. On the top shelf are seasonings such as miso, fruit sauce, and margarine. On the next shelf are containers of leftover. And there are three drawers in the bottom of the refrigerator. There are only vegetables in a one of these drawers, but in other two drawers, there are many frozen foods such as ice cream and frozen udon. I like this drawer the most because there are always delicious foods in it.
Mariko
My refrigerator
I have a refrigerator which is white and small in my kitchen. It is divided in two sections. The top one is for freeze, the bottom one is for cold storage. In freezer space, there are few stuffs. For example, mochi, udon, ice cubes. In cold storage space, there are so many stuffs. On the right side, when the door opens, there are Japanese tea, seasonings (like ketchup, mayonnaise, sauce for Yakiniku, ponzu, etc) and cheeses. On the left side, there are bacon, winner, eggs, liquors, butter, miso and container of leftovers. Like this, my refrigerator is chock-full of so many practical stuffs. I love my refrigerator much. Shinya Nagai
My Refrigerator
I am going to write about my refrigerator. In my house the refrigerator is maybe the most important of all the electric appliances I have. It is not so big. It is a 450 liters size, and I am thinking in the possibility to buy a new one because its color is fading off. When I bought it, it used to be gray, but now it has became beige or something near to that color. It has three compartments. The top shelf is the biggest. That is the space for milk, eggs, pizzas, butter, drinks, and almost everything. At the middle comes the freezer. Now, everything comes frozen, so that is one more reason to think about getting a new refrigerator. In the supermarket I always find a lot of delicious frozen food, but I do not have enough space in that shelf. And, at the bottom comes the space for vegetables and fruits. I always have a lot of fruits in my refrigerator. Sometimes I forget what it is inside, and buy the same fruit. That is funny and crazy, but happens to me sometimes.
My refrigerator which is a little bit taller than me is at the kitchen of my house. Its color is light green on the outside and white on the other side. I use it jointly with my family. So we can see variety prints on its door, which notify us of the way of separating garbage or the athletic meet in the junior high school my sister and brother go. Also, there are a lot of variety things in it. For example, propolis pills in a bottle, a carton of milk, a piece of cake someone left, and some bottles of seasonings and dressings are on the middle shelf of it. And then there are pieces of ice in a box, ice cream and some frozen food on the upper shelf and a bundle of leeks, three carrots, a Japanese white radish and an unopened carton of milk on the lower shelf. And also there is something we do not remember what is it on each of the shelf. Sometimes we forgot the leftovers in it for a long time, so we must set to clean it as soon as possible!
My Refrigerator
I have a refrigerator in the kitchen, and it has a door and three drawers. At the back side of the door, there are some milk, eggs, and kinds of sauces. In addition, there are many kinds of things in the door, and there are four selves in it. At the top one, there are a bottle of instant coffee, thin wheat noodles, shiitake mushrooms and so on. In fact, I can’t quite see there unless reach up because its position is little higher than me. There are soybean paste, butter, and jam at the second one, and there are kimchi, pickles, and side dish which is leftovers at the third one. At the bottom one, there are chocolates, yogurts, and cut fruits. In top drawer, there are some big plastic bottles, sweet sake for seasoning, and many kinds of vegetables such as tomatoes and cucumbers. There are ice creams, even if in winter, meat, and subdivided and packed rice which is already boiled for keeping in the middle one. The bottom one is also a freezer, and there are bread, dried bonito, and many kinds of packed foods which is already cooked and kept for my lunch in it.
Remi Matsubara
My Refrigerator
In my opinion, a refrigerator is an indispensable invention in the twentieth century, and my refrigerator is like a small safe supermarket. My family members and I share the gray refrigerator which maintains a temperature below minus five degrees Celsius. As is often the case with a refrigerator, my refrigerator has three shelves and two drawers to keep food separately. On the top shelf, there are seasonings such as pepper, miso, garlic, spice and Parmesan cheese, and these are organized by little boxes. On the next shelf, there are eggs and leftovers although the leftovers are not arranged methodically. I have four family members thus we need a free space to preserve leftovers or extra drinks on the second shelf. On the third shelf is a carton of milk, a pitcher of tea, and a bottle of soy sauce. Furthermore, there are daily foods such as butter, yogurt, meat, and ham then both mayonnaise and ketchup are also kept there. In addition to that, there are two drawers in the bottom of my refrigerator. There are frozen foods and ices in the first drawer, and there are vegetables and fruit in the second drawer. As far as I am concerned, a refrigerator reflects the characteristic or personality of each person. My refrigerator is not organized neatly but it preserves a considerable amount of food and drink. The refrigerator is useful to keep numerous foods for a long time, and I think that is a reason why the refrigerator was popularized in the course of the twentieth century.
My Refrigerator
My refrigerator is very messy, because there is much food in it. When I open the refrigerators door, I can find milk, water, eggs, and many seasonings at the door side. In the upper side of refrigerator, there are jam, rice, chocolates, and the remnants of a meal. At the middle side, there are vegetables in it. My mother always tells me to eat vegetables every day, so there are many kinds of vegetables. She wants me to eat vegetables, but I don’t like vegetables, so I don’t eat vegetables of my own accord. She is worried about my health. The bottom of the refrigerator is a freezer. There are refrigerated fish, frozen food, and ice creams. There is much food in my refrigerator, so I can eat something if I’m hungry.
Megumi Uejo
My Refrigerator
Today, I will introduce content of my refrigerator by focusing on the top section because I often see it when I return to home. Top section is separated in three sections. At the top shelf, there are my sister’s foods which I can not touch them. Once I ate a chocolate which was left there, she got very angry. So I can not touch them even if I eager to eat. At the middle shelf, there are materials for tomorrow’s lunch box or breakfast. Since it takes long time for thawing frozen food for lunch box, my mother always keeps them at there. At the bottom shelf, there are leftovers I always check when I return home. If there are my favorite dishes when I am full, I was very disappointed. As I said, our refrigerator has roles for each sections.
My Refrigerator
I have a big and white refrigerator are equipped with three closets for holding some foods and drinks. There are a lot of frozen foods in the top of refrigerator. Many kind of retort pouch are arranged inside of freezer’s door. The ice made by myself is in the left side of freezer. Some coolers are in the top of freezer. Next, in the middle of refrigerator, a lot of various foods and drinks are in there. Some bottle of water and tea are placed inside of the refrigerator’s door. I have several source and spice which the best before of these are unknown at the back of refrigerator. And, I preserve a variety of vegetables in the bottom of refrigerator. Some times I hide my favorite beer at the back.
My refrigerator
I have one refrigerator in the kitchen in my home. It is about two meters high and has five rooms. In the top room, I keep raw fish, meat, eggs, snacks and drink such as milk, coffee and tea. I often check this room to find something to eat and drink when I come back home. At the second shelf from the top, I have two rooms. In the left room, I keep ice, and in the right room, I keep ice creams and frozen food which I sometimes use to make my lunch. In the third room, I keep all kinds of vegetables, tofu, konnyaku and so on. When I make lunch and dinner, I certainly check this room and take out ingredients from here. At the last, as for the bottom room, I actually don’t know what is in this room. However, it is certain that there is something, so I’ll check the inside of it today.
My Refrigerator
Let me tell you about my refrigerator. I live with my family, so our refrigerator is comparatively big. And there are almost every day many foods or seasonings in the refrigerator. Our refrigerator is white and placed in a corner of Kitchen room. It has three shelves, the upper is a cold room, and the middle is a vegetable room, and the lower is a freezer. In the cold room、there are some drinks and seasonings such as miso, some sauces and some dressings. In the vegetable room, there are many vegetables and fruits. In the freezer, there are frozen foods like meats, fish and so on. And they has sometimes ice creams so I always open the freezer when I come home.
My Refrigerator
In my kitchen, there is a big white refrigerator witch filled with many foods and drinks and some flavoring. It has a door and four drawers.
At the back side of the door, there are some drinks like iced tee and water, and then, there are some eggs and flavoring like wasabi, mayonnaise and mustard. In addition, there are many kinds of food in the door. At the top shelf, there are some cup of yogurts, jelly, cake, and something like desert. The second and third shelf, there are leftover, and bootless of juice.
Bottom of the door space, there are the drawers for vegetables. I don’t like vegetables and I don’t cook, I rarely open this drawer. Therefore I can’t write about this drawer in detail.
Other three drawers are freezing compartment. Tow drawers are small and one is big. One of the small drawer is only for ice, and other is the only for ice cream.
The biggest drawer of the freezer components contains many frozen foods, so I briefly satisfy my appetite. The frozen food is very useful and delicious. I know, these are not good for my health, but I love the frozen food.
I love my refrigerator except the drawer of vegetables.
Manami Maeshiro.
My refrigerator
My small white refrigerator is always filled with foods and drinks. It has two doors. Upper side is cold room and the bottom one is for freezer compartment. Cold room has three shelves. On the top shelf, there are processed foods like butter, jam, cheese and natto. On the middle shelf, there are something that I made. Because these cannot keep for a long time, it is always changing. Okinawa cooks are often refrigerated. On the bottom shelf, there are vegetables which I use for cooking. Onions, Carrots and potatoes are always laid in a supply. On the door shelf, eggs, seasonings, flavorings and a carton of milk are there. Freezer is empty because I never eat frozen foods.
My Refrigerator
In my house, there is big refrigerator. But there are so many things because my family has five people. In the first shelf of the top box, there are green tea bottles, soup stocks. And in the second shelf, there are fermented soy beans, yogurt which is my mother made, and soy bean paste. In the third shelf, we put the tunas, pokes, and shallots. And forth shelf, there are margarine and two or three of beer cans. And in the second box, there are ices. In the third box, we keep the meats and the vegetables. And in last box, we put the frozen foods. Maybe, you recognized, our refrigerator is untidy. We really need arrangement.
Moriyuki Inamine
My Refrigerator
My family has a pink refrigerator in a corner of kitchen. The every side of the fridge except front one, there are lots of notes of recipe which taught by my grandmother. It seem to be little strange that the every edge of the bottom is covered with some sponge because my father used to hit his fifth toe against it. The fridge is double door. The pocket of the left door is space for eggs, cheese, miso and some sauces. The other side of pocket is for drinks such as milk, fizzy water and mother’s homemade tomato juice. On the top shelf, we keep some wrapped plates and plastic boxes of leftovers. On the next shelf, my mother’s territory, she keeps several cosmetic lotions which are arranged by size at the left side of the shelf. She also puts thousands of bottles of cosmetic drinks which contain lots of collagen and vitamins at the right side of the shelf. On the third shelf are some fruits and at least three liters of homemade yoghurt which are in some huge plastic boxes. On the bottom shelf, we keep vegetables which are in a plastic bag separately. Since we have just bought the new fridge, it is still quite neat and clean so far.
Ayumi
My Refrigerator
My refrigerator is green, big, and a little old one. It has four drawers and these have different function. In the first drawer, which has two doors and three rows, there are some daily foodstuffs. On the right door, there are eggs, seasonings, and pitcher of water. On the left door, there are only bottles of dressing. There are three rows in the first drawer; however, we don’t classify specific foodstuffs into each row, so that positions of almost all foodstuffs are changed every day. In the second and third drawers are freezers. My mother uses frozen food every day, so these functions are necessary for her. In the lower drawer, we stock vegetables. My family is big family, so my refrigerator is always full and works very hard.
Our Refrigerator
Our refrigerator stands in a corner of the kitchen. It has three levels of rooms. The top room is the biggest. There are foods which we have to eat in a few days like eggs, milk and leftovers. Also there are sauce, dressings, and water which we use often. Smaller ones are arranged in the inside of the door. In the second level, there are two rooms. Left one is only for ice and right one is for frozen foods. Various foods are stocked in the frozen room. There are meats, fish, ice creams, and so on. Because all of those in there are paced in containers and same white color by ice, I can’t tell which is which. In the bottom, there is a room for vegetables like lettuces, tomatoes, green peppers. Too many foods are in our refrigerator so I want to tell my mother to use those already in there before she buys another.
My refrigerator
I lived with my family together. But my father lives separated by himself for work at Yonaguni island. So in my house, there are only 3 of member, mother, younger brother and me. My mother also works as a teacher. She doesn’t have much time for doing housework. When I have time, I help it, but these days, I also don’t have time. My mother is on diet now, and I don’t eat much. So only my brother eats meal in my house. Both of us stopped cooking. Because of that, my refrigerator has always nothing in there.
’08. 11. 27th
Nina Arakaki
051803E
My Refrigerator
My senior gave the refrigerator to me to easy cooking. This one is very small; the length is about 30cm, the wide is about 45cm, and the height is about 100cm. The color is a dark blue so that I become clam seeing it. I always keep water in it because I love drinking it every time. I think it is so healthy. Then there are often vegetables, fruits, eggs, and meats. Because I live myself, I often keep a food which I cooked in it as a preserving food to eat tomorrow. Therefore I can cut down the cooking time a little and I can learn something more. However, one of its lack points is to have a slope. It is because a metal fitting on one side of the lower part cannot be found. I think it is also one of charming points of my refrigerator.
Yoshiko
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